I tried making a more cartoony style GFX this time around. I just took a shot in the dark and I’m fairly proud of it!
The text is what’s mainly off-putting for me, what do you think?
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The render of the character looks amazing but the text seems to look jagged, you can fix this by changing the text anti-aliasing to sharp. Well at least that’s how I know how to fix it in Photoshop. 
The render is good, and for your 2nd GFX it’s pretty nice. The text looks pixelated, might want to fix that.
Looks cool! Great job as a 2nd GFX. The render could use some more work, the limbs could be placed better, like the arms are currently a little off, and the legs should not be stuck into the body.
The lighting could also use some work, I can directly see that it is pointed very strongly at the arm and the rest of the body is very dark. Instead of using a single light, use a lightroom! You can search free lightrooms up, or follow a tutorial like this one!
Also when rendering, think about using ambient occlusion, global illumination, and things like that.
I recommend going on YouTube to learn more and improve. But right now, you’re on the correct path to improve!
Great job in general!
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