I want feedback on this fortune telling store. (I know the outside is a bit bare!)
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The sign is contrasting too much with the brick. Maybe you can change the white color to a brown
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The two windows on the side should have a little display showing some things inside her shop.
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I like it but its too low poly and everything else is good but also make sure you make the things with a little bit higher of detail.
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Suggestions:
- Change the roof of the building in picture 2 to be overhanging a bit on the sides and a little more on the front.
- Swap the material from ForceField to Glass in picture 1 of the orb, also have the orb emit some light for a sPoOkIeR effect.
- Add interior + exterior lighting in both pictures, interior furniture will do good as well.
- Remove clipboards in picture 1 and replace it with some decals representing fortune telling or something similar to that. The clipboards feel too out-of-touch with everything else you have going on, as it gives me an office vibe.
Other than those suggestions, nice work! I’m very impressed by what you have made here.
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Using your suggestions this is the interior I came up with: 
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Again, clipboards, but pretty nice. Maybe move the character’s limbs to make it feel more realistic?
The exterior needs some improvement, try looking for references at Google that’ll help you how to make it better (Only If you don’t know how it should look like)
The exterior looks flat and lacks depth