I have stuff on my gfx but for some reason the X factor is missing 
Please help making it better and also give a feedback.
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The name tags are somewhat off putting. Other wise it just feels a bit plain maybe try making it look a bit more exciting.
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Maybe add a bit more bends to the arms, also maybe to the waist? That might make the scene a little more dynamic, like if the characters were speeding through the water, unless you were going for a bit more casual vibe. Overall its pretty decent, the lighting and water are good, but I do agree that you should remove the name tags, they don’t really fit.
Looks good so far. I think it’s quite odd that the sun ray is reflecting wrong objects from another angle side. It may be a good idea to make the effect reflect a certain side instead of creating a weird appearance.
My only other comments would be to add more light into the scene. I’m curious that sun ray could glare on the water a bit to create a more defining approach, so you should incorporate some realism into the scene, try adding other interesting elements perhaps a boat in the sea line or other features you could possibly add. Perhaps fill the corners with details to make it more appealing and not something undetailed and simplistic.
Overall it’s a simple scene, but there’s always space for improvements that could be made. Consider to take the opportunity to experiment with other options and see what works best to you!
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I’m not exactly sure why there are usernames, it seems unusual. If this is supposed to act as in-game footage, I recommend actually going in-game and taking screenshots, edit them, etc. If they are there just for looks, I don’t see a need for them.
I do not know if this is a game thumbnail or just a mini project, but I’ll assume it’s a thumbnail. The rendering quality is actually fairly nice, and the light from the sunrise adds a cool effects.
I do believe this is a good GFX, but if it were a thumbnail, you could have added a game title.
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Thank you for your replies, it was very helpful.
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