Recently i made a gfx in like 45 minutes. Feel free to give suggestions/tips
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This looks pretty nice, i like the DOP and the lightning reflections, it also looks pretty funny, good job with your work, even though im advising you to use a better watermark.
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Thank you. i appreciate it. And ye you’re totally right about the watermark. have a nice day 
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Better than I could do! Nice job.
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tysm. i bet you could do better tho ^^
there’s a lil bit blur to the noobs face, other than that 9/10
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i like how you utilized Depth of Field (DoF) but it focuses on the gun and I feel it should focus on the head. one thing i noticed at a glance was that the clouds and background texture was very low quality and the sun is like a 20 sided star. you are not doing sunrays properly. the posing is nice but head is tilted weirdly. the camera is tilted and the head is tilted so the head is upright and looks kinda eerie. it also looks like he is pointing the gun at the camera, or up, or somewhere in between. hard to tell.
so overall:
perspective issues,
posing issues
no lighting issues
background issues
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I think this looks really good, I love the reflection on the gun, the blur on the back, the sky.
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Of course, this is only done in 45 minutes which is incredibly impressive! As for tips, I’d recommend having more of the gun in focus, and having more of a fading feather effect between the blur and the focused subject of the image, because right now it looks as though you’re shooting with an f0.5 lens into the sun at midday.
I’d recommend making the time of day golden hour for the best color warmth and the easiest colors to work with.
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tysm for the tips that’s really gonna help me
I like it, the camera angles are great. The blurs are great. The lighting is great.
Consider adding a watermark.
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