The guy himself is good, and I like how the text is old-fashioned, which I assume is the style you’re going for. The only thing I don’t like is how the background is an IRL forest. It would look way better if the background was a Roblox forest, and make the lighting match. Besides the background, it looks great!
Although yes it does look nice, the background is a little much and disconnects the viewer from what the actual game is about, a more obvious roblox background would allow the gfx to flow better. And so I agree with my comrades. Good work, I believe you have talent to go places.