A house that I'm using for a game

Hey all,

I been recently working on the exterior of a house that I’m using for a game. I would like some general feedback to help me improve.

Screenshots:
https://gyazo.com/4952cce020fdf1344aa9bf708354aee4
https://gyazo.com/fc6d52971c1d0d03f0dbf72d31ad8f88https://gyazo.com/cf5c8f6282639c8e97cc53d2e118113a

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Looks great so far! Here are some of my suggestions:

  • The door looks odd. The grey window when paired with the brown door kinda blends in together from afar and it doesnt seem right. I just recommend doing a plain brown door without the window and using a lighter brown color.
  • The striped pattern on the roof looks very weird and I don’t think that matches. I would just remove the stripes altogether and just have a black roof; that would look much better.
  • The garage door doesn’t look right, I would try using a different image (or even better, make some indents using unions or a meshpart). Also, the little roof over the garage door looks odd I don’t think that should be there
  • The black lines on the walls are way too dark, I think it should be the same yellow color as the wall but just made slightly darker. For example, if the wall color is (255, 255, 255), then you should make the lines slightly darker to (230, 230, 230).
  • The colors of the house are very dark and almost gloomy. I think you should try using whiter colors for stuff like the support beams instead of using a gray.
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Alright, Thanks! I’ll try improve it.

The house design is a bit odd to be honest

  • The roof of the house does not match that great it’s poorly designed
  • The windows on the roof look too small and disorientated. It really does not look like it fits in at all
  • The door is very big and the windows don’t match the design of it at all.
  • The garage just looks like a wide shed with a big door somehow attached to the house.
  • That window on the side does not fit there at all, you could’ve tried putting a circular shaped window to make it seem like there is an attic in the house.
    Overall i rate it 4/10 the design and placements of the windows, the roof, it really is bothering and could be fixed up tremendously. At least you tried is all I can say.

I mean the house itself looks good,atleast for me as im not pro builder,but there are some stuff thats already told.but good anyways!

Hey. This design looks really weird to me. Like nearly nothing overlaps. The front door and the window beside it looks a bit… different. The patio is not connected to the roof (which it usually does), the window on the top left in 3rd pic looks extremely weird. Too tall & bulky. The slate (the gables of the house) does not match the color OR material of the general color of the house, which is also pretty unusual… The tiles for the roof are way off. Just use a hollow semi circle as normal tiles.Front house fence for patio is uneven on both sides, first pic on the right I’m not sure what the white part of the house is and is also not overlapping into the home,which most extensions of a house (like a garage does). The windows at the front of the house also do not match the height of the ones at the side. That being said, the house looks okay but just very unusual.