Later in the day I’ll provide some more in-depth feedback—would you rather this feedback through GitHub or itemized on these forums?
Just by reviewing a random script I can see that your comments are essentially just clutter; remember, comments should describe some rationale or intention, not what the code is doing. The only people that should be reading the source code should also be able to understand the Lua language, the Luau derivative, and the Roblox APIs.
Also, be sure to remove any trailing whitespace from lines. It ruins git diffs. I saw a few lines had some.
As an aside, good job on using GitHub! Open source or not, I would conside any VCS such as Git non-optional.