I’m currently working on a showcase/tycoon kind of game. Feel free to rate!
Game link:: | 🌎 Earth. (Showcase) - Roblox
(All information is at the menu GUI)
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It looks promising so far. The music fits very well, the lighting is nice and the terrain is well made. There’s a few issues I’ve spotted though, which I’ll list below.
Since you’ve increased the size of the sun, the quality of the image has clearly decreased around the outside. You might want to decrease the size of the sun or use a different image to correct this.
Some of these little plants are floating.
These trees are a bit repetitive; you could slightly change the colour and size of some of them in order to make the map feel more natural.
The music also ends abruptly; you may want to find a version that loops or ends properly and doesn’t cut off mid-way through. I can also hear extremely loud tree-falling sounds at random intervals but I haven’t cut down any trees.
Despite the minor issues, it’s clear you’ve put effort into it and I think it’s so far quite impressive. Nice job.
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So… here is my feedback:
1.Make the flowers non cancollidable:
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some of the objects just floating:
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Is it me or the music and fx are just too loud(the tree falling is the loudest)?
4.Make this NPC Animated(looking around or something), that would be the cherry on top:
I think my report will help you make the game better. Overall i enjoyed the game, nice job! I really love the aesthetics.
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It looks great! The terrain and lighting is on point. One tiny nitpick is that the shadows are sort of choppy/laggy and the axe blade looks lopsided. I should point out that the butterflies are FM, but ROBLOX has the Toolbox and FMs for a reason, right? Overall, I think it looks great and could work very well as some kind of tycoon!
Also, this may be because I haven’t been in the game for too long, but I think island-specific trees could make the world look more diverse in my opinion.