Any way to improve the text?

Hi! I’ve recently returned from a long hiatus on graphics and did one of my first practice graphic earlier today. I like how it looks overall but i feel like there could be more that i could do to the text, any suggestions?

Thanks!!

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Hmmm maybe make the words wavy or like make some of the words in the form of objects?
(i don’t really have experience with gfx before but I’ve seen some gfx with words)
but it is really up to you how you want the text to be like.

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Ideally, you would want the text to be parralel with the other vertical lines you have in your image (The shoulders)

Right now the Text and the shoulders bend in different directions:

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You should either invert the direction of the text bending, straighten out both the shoulders and the text or move the text to the top, to create a circular shape. Doing it any of these 3 ways will make your GFX more peacefull and visually appealing.

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Sorry for bad editing of the images, I hope you can understand the meaning.

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I would also suggest that you incorporate more color contrast. Right now, there’s a lot of blue and white. A lot of pieces of the image look overexposed. If this was your intention, great! Otherwise, I’d try a different color shift in the background or on the text, just to give it more depth.

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Thanks, i’ll take that into account!!