I like it, I recon you could improve the character’s gesture and make it look more frightened, I highly recommend installing Moon Animator, it’s a relatively simple plugin to use that you can use to animate your characters and my GFX outcomes when I use the plugin usually tend to come out much better.
You could also give your character a more fitting face, there’s a lot to pick from in the decal library on roblox but this is of course optional, this is just my suggestion.
But what if he’s not scared ;)))))
Again it’s up to you but I just feel like it would more effective if he did look scared to give the gfx an atmosphere.
I’ll try it thanks for the feedback once again!
Give Him Some Shoes 
Oh I forgot again ahahaha 
Bruv, this is modeled in blender. He should change the face and overall demeanor of the character to look more frightened or angry.
What I would do is make the corners of the screen dark and faint so it’s one if those eerie vibes that would go with the scene.