I like it, I recon you could improve the character’s gesture and make it look more frightened, I highly recommend installing Moon Animator, it’s a relatively simple plugin to use that you can use to animate your characters and my GFX outcomes when I use the plugin usually tend to come out much better.
You could also give your character a more fitting face, there’s a lot to pick from in the decal library on roblox but this is of course optional, this is just my suggestion.
But what if he’s not scared ;)))))
Again it’s up to you but I just feel like it would more effective if he did look scared to give the gfx an atmosphere.
I’ll try it thanks for the feedback once again!
Oh I forgot again ahahaha 
Bruv, this is modeled in blender. He should change the face and overall demeanor of the character to look more frightened or angry.
What I would do is make the corners of the screen dark and faint so it’s one if those eerie vibes that would go with the scene.