Been working on a ROBLOX showcase, would like some feedback!

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I’ve been recently working on a cool little showcase, and I’ve been developing it overtime as I get waves of motivation here and there. I’d like to get some feedback because I feel like I’m far enough that I can start getting some feedback, as I continue to add new things. Currently some cool spots in the game to visit are the subway station and the apartment.

Currently, I’m aware of these issues and odd building things:

  • NPC’s head at the elevator can turn around completely
  • Unfinished road side buildings on the outside of the fence
  • Teleporting can for some reason cause new server joiners to not see the player in the correct position
  • Bit hard to know where to go, (how can I fix this?)
  • Odd roofing part of the alleyway (stops abruptly)
  • Starting fade in audio might be loud
  • Unfinished apartment

I recommend playing at graphics level 10, thanks!

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Ok, I was surprised, very nice work, the concept is solid and I love it, though I would make it have more shape and make it less blocky. For example, my cyberpunk era, I used a lot of depth and different colors and textures.

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You seemed to use alot of the same color and texture

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Also, I love this little touch, it ads and immersive touch to it that allows you to interact with the game.
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oops, I broke it
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Also, you should try covering this up.

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Overall, I like this build, just add more detail, depth, more interesting things like smoke or sumthing, and work on that elevator and 1st floor, :wink:

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Thank you so much! I’ll work on filling in those spaces, and that chair teleport thing I’ll fix up. will also ensure its less blocky (and add some more colors).

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its been a loooong time :face_with_monocle: :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes: this post just gave me nostalgia