Hello I am Bosscomic103 I am a Roblox Builder who has been building for almost 3 years and I have recently started trying to get hired, I am 14 years old and have tons of time on my hands. I specialize in low and mid poly but I can do some high poly, I don’t use blender, but I can do some pretty cool stuff in studio, I hope you hire me! -Boss
Great work for such a new builder, I can tell you will improve rapidly in your skills.
Things to work on:
Start using other bricks than cubes and cylinders, use every brick that roblox gives you to its full extent. This includes wedges, spheres, and also triangles. (Not roblox but can be found in the toolbox.
Your buildings feel stiff and blocky in your low poly builds, if you want a better result, make it look cartoons and almost pulled straight from an showing of a disney movies. To combat this, use archways and semi-circles to make a better low poly vibe + feeling.
Other than this, your building is on a good track, I wanna see what you’ll be able to do once you’ve learned blender