Can I get some feedback on my new animation?

I have been animating for 5 days now and I am looking to greatly broaden my skills. Please let me know about things that I can improve on. All feedback positive or negative is appreciated.

(Compressed VIdeo)

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Looks really good! I don’t really do much animation so I can’t really say alot here, but it looks really nice

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The fire, fan, and the guy all were greatly animated. The thing that kinda bugged me was the floppy camera movement. It would be more best to have a smooth movement. If your trying to go for the movement in the scary movies look up how they move the camera.

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Really nice i like it.You should make more animations.i am really not gonna suggest any thing tho becuase i am not an animator.

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Idk if the the blurriness of some objects in the animation is intentional or not, but maybe change the lighting a bit so its not so blurry in some parts of the animation (example) Guy at 0:00 to 0:04 :+1: :+1: Good animation though Ngl

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It’s mainly blurry because I compressed the video so I would be able to put it onto dev forum.

Okay thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.

Just like me on a winter saturday night.


I like it! Since I am doing a game that’s all about this, I really like it! The smooth animations, but most the camera wobble!

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Looks great, kinda like a cinematic, keep doing

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