The three rendered characters are just too small on the screen, make it bugger and show as if the zombie is holding them in his hands.
Other thing is that the text, maybe make it bigger too, looks really small.
Assuming your objective is a sort of eerie, yet cartoony, aesthetic, I think it works quite well! However, I would recommend using a few more light sources just to make it feel a bit less static. additionally, maybe try some different light colours, red perhaps? You could also draw more attention to the characters by changing the camera angle such that theyre larger. And I personally would make some of the skin material have subsurface scattering and less reflection, but thats subjective!
Hello, @Olinator21. This is amazing. First off, I would recommend you to choose a better font to match with the GFX (no offense). I would go to dafont.com for some good fonts. You are able to test how it looks, and you can download the font if your editor doesn’t have it.
I like the eerie look #1 is giving me, definitely go for that
Quite bright for a gloomy apocalypse…definitely 1

