How can I improve this
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Hey,
I like the background design but the middle and the sky seems empty.
If I were you I would add a big text over the sky that’s parallel to the horizon. It should be like maybe all in caps but definately parallel to the horizon!
You could maybe also add some smoke / fog to make it look more intensive.
What you really always need to do is to add a watermark once you give away pictures like this. Also add a credits thingy to the bottom right with your name!
I hope this helped you! Feel free to ask me questions if you have some. 
- Cheerful
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So I just see you edited it, now it looks bad. now there are just lines on the thumbnail which makes it hard to see what is in it.
That was a watermark so people don’t steal it
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Instead of putting lines there as your watermark, put your name there or something I guess.
Like this:
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To add on, having your watermark in a plain background will let people go on photo shop and colour over it easily.
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So I see you updated it. But you haven’t done what I suggested. I don’t know if you didn’t like it but my suggestion was to make the writing parallel to the horizon which means you should turn it down on the left side so that its parallel. It will look much better in my opinion.
I am doing what you suggested now I just quickly added it because I was in a hurry
I really like the shadows you’ve achieved down the right hand side. I would suggest changing the font to someone ‘cooler’. You can find some really nice fonts at https://www.dafont.com/ use the search bar to find a font that fits your needs. 
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