this game is based on the tiktok by Citra who is making a animatronic in his garage.
let me know if you like it.
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This is actually pretty good. The monster is really well made. The only problem is that it’s WAY too dark. I understand that it’s for the ambience, but I literally cannot see more than a foot away - let alone fine the generators.
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Erm, why are some of the UIs dark gray and black? Barely visible. Black and white (or the opposite) instead. Or in the case of some UIs, light gray and black. Also, the gamepasses’ image are missing.
This is actually pretty good. The monster is really well made. The only problem is that it’s WAY too dark. I understand that it’s for the ambience, but I literally cannot see more than a foot away - let alone fine the generators.
It ain’t that dark. Come on! Turn the screen’s brightness up!
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there is no way to escape him so if he starts chasing is just a matter of time.
then the idea to find random generators (connected to nothing) in a gigantic EMPTY map is really repetitive like the gameplay, where you need to hold shift and look for bright pixels.
returning to the “gigantic empty map”, i reccomend to make it smaller but compact, i mean why the neighborhood has so many houses but no one is there? add storytelling, like broken houses, dead people or whatever youd like. (and please, make the map borders better, as i had to run straight for a minute only to have an invisible wall, which doesnt even make sense as i could escape him by just running)
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dont use chatgpt, the description doesnt even match the game
instead of rebooting the idea, i recommend (again) to check “CHAIN”:
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the generators in the game are connected from wired poles, which those can be used to actually find em by following the wires, instead of bright outlines that can be seen from miles.
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the monster can be outchased by hiding behind stuff.
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the game has a clear map storytelling (meaning that he was there before you, and that things happened), the generators actually make sense (you need to turn on the radio), and even if its small it is NOT repetitive at all.
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the game doesnt kick you after death and waste 30 mins of walking simulator.
so unless you wanted to make a fast parody of a tiktok creepypasta, put more effort on the gameplay loop, because:
no one enjoyed it, and im not hating, if you want more tips then either ask me or check Game Maker Tool Kit, as i learned there how to make an enjoyable game
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Hey HardRaid! I just played Nosey Is Missing during my latest indie Roblox stream review. The atmosphere is incredibly spooky — those empty houses and drifting animatronics really got under my skin! I loved the immersive, analog-horror vibe and your unique use of sound. The visuals do a great job setting the mood, but I did get a bit lost on what to do at times, and there were a few small bugs with doors and the character movement. i think, a brief tutorial or just a hint system would help new players settle in.
Scores: Gameplay 5 | Visuals 6 | Originality 4 | Polish 4 | Games Radar
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