[CLOSED FOREVER!] Feedback on my first game intro

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Hello! I made a game intro which starts with a loading screen that shows different images of maps, although, one of them is just a gamepass. And a camera zooming out from the player to the lobby. Here’s how it looks like:

Does it look good?
  • Yes it does for your first intro
  • Pretty good, might need to improve (State why [optional])
  • Not really

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Obviously, I can do better so I’ll improve on it. Feedback is appreciated for now!

Edit: Removed the loading screen from the intro.

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For the loading screen, maybe increase the time shown for each map and you should also add some camera movement to spice it up a bit. Other than that it looks pretty good.

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The 9nly thing that irritates me is the VIP, could you replace that

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I think each map should appear longer, and that a blur effect should probably be added so it doesn’t clash with the text on the loading screen itself.

Also, maybe it’s just temporary, but the “VIP” picture needs to go. Text on text = bad

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Takes a while. 30 seconds to load up the game is pretty long

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The camera cut scenes are nice, but your UI is significantly holding you back.

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Thanks for feedback and suggestions. I’ll decrease the loading time and redo the UI. And yes, personally the VIP obviously looks bad so that’s going. Edit: The maps were actually images so I’ll replace that.

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Could be improved a lot.

  • Loading time is too long
  • Transitions are very slow
  • UI is cluttered and poorly designed
  • Images/icons are low-quality
  • No “Skip Loading” button
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It may just be me, but I think your text is a bit hard to see against the background. Mainly talking about the title “Spleef” text in the middle

I don’t want to be rude, but I think the colours on the left after the intro has finished are a bit too contrasting, but that may just be me. (By that I mean the shop stays and spectate bar things)

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