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TL;DR: I like the low poly design!
Longer version: I think the fountain’s ball object should be changed to low poly aswell, furthermore I think the house’s design should be different from one another,
Anyways, good work!
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Looks alright so far. Some of my suggestions are to add more around the map such as low poly trees, bushes, benches, leaderboards, decorations, etc. Something to give it more detail. Additionally, maybe make a couple of the houses different colors so that they stand out from one another. For your first lobby build this is pretty good! Keep building!
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There’s not much to say, especially for a first lobby it’s extremely well detailed. Though, I would suggest making the rooftops a bit thicker and giving the Fountain some more depth since it’s lacking some detail for low poly.
Lastly, try toning down the brightness of the windows and making the doors smaller, we’re not giants!
Overall a nice build, just be careful with the sizes!
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It definitely needs more variation in houses, copy and pasting doesn’t give it that feel as if time was taken on it, so I really suggest in adding some sort of variation in buildings like making them longer taller and putting objects in other places such as windows and the doors, but it’s a good attempt
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Awesome work! Looks really great! It’s slightly small in my opinion (unless that’s what you’re going for) Maybe add some sort of particles or flowing water to the fountain. But other than that, spectacular!
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It looks okay… but very very very simplistic. Houses appear wayy too large and the fountain is weird looking.
Love the deign however, I would recommend taking the time to think of your own ideas before recruiting feedback from other users this will help ease give constructive feedback and not something that’s already planned out or things things they you will possibly add.
I feel like the lobby is to small creating maybe floating islands with a bridge that connects to it will improve it more. Try adding vacant things like shops/buildings to make it a little more lively as well or buildings so players could buy things while they wait inside the lobby! You also might be able to add some obstacles or an obby so players could interact with each other instead of walking around a small area doing nothing as they will get kind of bored.
At the start there isn’t much to say because a lot of my feedback and others will be probably all ready added or planned, consider taking the time to place your own ideas to your lobby.
In comparison to the houses, the fountain seems quite small. I would assume the house would be a bit too big. Also, add some natural trees, and rocks, etc.
The fountain’s ball isn’t looking the greatest alone, add a statue on top of it?