So, for free, that’s amazing, personally, nobody now needs a budget. But, what are those clothes valued at for you? 50 Robux, 100, maybe even 250 for a full set of one dozen.
Also, maybe I’d ad 3-5 examples instead of just 2. Now, I know it’s for practice, just tell them your years of experience (as you did), and they’ll hire you based off of that.
Also, we need to see that backs of the clothing, not just the front.
Other than those few things, this portfolio looks good.
Hopefully those tips help you!
Gooday!
Edit: maybe check out this post: [R$!] Looking For Modelers & Clothing Designers (Napoleonic Era)