Clothing Store Building. Feedback is appreciated

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Greetings! a few mins ago i completely finished this place, here some pics:

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I used blender for the trees and 2 freemodels for the skybox and the textures, here the links for them

Link of the game: Clothing Store Building L3 Showcase - Roblox

I would like to receive feedback from this because i want to keep improving to a point where i can start taking commissions when my mood gets better.

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The store is amazing it has tons of details and is a great design a suggestion i have is maybe dim down the lighting in room (third and fourth picture)

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Try adding some decal textures from the ROBLOX library, as it could bring out more realism features to your clothing store! I am stating this because I am not to fond with the texture of your water fountain, it seems to bores me to see how unoriginal it is.
Here are some tips on how to making your building a little bit more interesting:

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Overall you have an outstanding build of a clothing store, keep up the great work!

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I dislike the terrain outside, and how you have a waiting room styled entrance. Mostly everything in the build is a free model, so I suggest tagging each model, before saying it’s “your build.” Overall, good job!