I would love if some people could test my obby to see is I scripted everything right and I wanted to see how people thought the game worked
\Okay, So a couple things I’ve noticed after playing for a second
Same thing beside the entrance

Other than that I think it looks nice. Some of the obby stages need tweaked a tad bit to make them slightly more difficult. Gl.
Its kinda bland. Everything works properly which is a good thing. But the orange jump thing is way too hard for people, and the checkpoint system brakes. Overall it needs a little work. But god job so far!
It’s ok but its hard to read the text at the end of the obby because its all parts and they morph together into just gray color. maybe put a invisible part with text on it using a surface gui,
It is an ok Obby but it has a few problems like the gap when you walk out, the spawn place was kind of floating it wasn’t put down properly. I also have a suggestion instead of having balls in the spawn place maybe replace it with something else instead. Otherwise it’s an alright Obby.
It’s a good start! I think it’d benefit from checkpoints (as most modern obbies have). Also, ‘kill bricks’ are usually neon to get the player’s attention.
So I just played the obby, here are my suggestions:
- Decorate the lobby (entry) more to impress new players better, to give them a better ‘welcome’ feeling. Add frames to the walls and maybe put the lights a bit lower. At photo one you can see the lights.
- A background music would be more cozy for players.
- I prefer day time over night time because it’s a bit dark and I think day time fits better with the obby style.
The blue ball can’t be seen very well for example. Or add lighting to the obby. Maybe a suggestion; water? (with lights which are standing on small rocks on the water) - Maybe try to add a theme to the obby, I find this pretty basic, or different obby levels than the basic ones.
- The orange climb level is for mobile users pretty hard. For me it is too, but maybe that’s because I’m not the best in obbys.
I couldn’t get further than photo 2 so this are my suggestions till that. It’s a good start for an obby.
Regards.