Comment on this screen of death (training camp)

hello developers i want to ask your opinion about this death screen with sound i made it with @SOTR654 this death screen you can see it in the boot camp experience in the combat training place this experience is the second part of recon place

I look forward to your opinions


Video is very laggy but it looks good, especially the blood and blur.
Not a fan of the over-used audio and “wasted” text, I would replace it with a diff audio and randomized text from a table of like 5diff death notes.
Not trying to say it’s bad but this is just my opinion.