Commission Build (Feedback Would Be Appreciated a lot)

What Was Asked From Me
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And I Did This Take Note I Am Fairly New So Any FeedBack Would Be Loved And Appreciated

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This Was His Response

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This Was Made For @Bradnod

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More Trees and maybe some see trough parts Fading on the outside so it looks more like a forest. Or you could add a fog effect.

ok thanks alot will try to add some more things

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Yes thanks i actually was just thinking about that so i made a few things can you tell me if i should add these models

Would That Be Good Enough?

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alright thanks alot im very new so im making new models every single day

The middle looks plain. Add some grass?

The middle is where the maps are loaded its for a floor is lava game

Maybe add some more grass around the map and or trees, maybe add some decorations like a wildlife animal something like that. Maybe.

This with a slightly bit more grass would be nice, however this looks great!