I have recently started building models on Roblox Studio and was wondering what I could change or add to my models. Any feedback would greatly be appreciated.
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the first build, the outer walls are very empty so I suggest you put your windows on there, rather than the porch area but both is fine.
the second one, the brick wall has a lot of empty gaps in between the windows so make the windows bigger as a model but delete a few so there’s not a huge empty spot everywhere.
Thanks for the feedback ill try to apply what you said.
For the first image, the walls, as anross have said, are empty, and the roof is very flat for me, try raising it by a couple to dozen studs.
The second image the walls only have windows, I suggest adding lines, and delete the fence in front of it and replace it with a plant box.
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Both look nice, however the walls of both feel quite empty (Especially on the first one.) This could be Remedied by adding some bricks sticking out on the second one, and maybe adding some more windows and decorations to the walls of the first.
I would suggest using custom textures. At the moment, due to the size of these buildings, the patterns look very repetitive and plain.
Other than that, looking pretty good!
Hopefully this helped! 
For a starter…I like it! Your first and second build are both fantastic! The first picture could use a tiny bit more detail, and the second picture, I do think the fences could ruin the picture. You could certainly add a gate. Overall it is great!
Nice job so far!
I think that both builds need more detail to break up the flatness of the materials you used. Ways you can fix this would be adding textures, decals, or things like pillars to break up the uniformity of the materials in both builds.
Keep up the good work!
The colour scheme is too basic and bland I feel like the similar colors such as the roof could possibly change try adding different designs so they won’t be very repetitive or similar.
I’d add more detail to the door or remove the wooden rails as they don’t quite match the overall style your going for I’m pretty sure those are put there for a reason? If not I would try removing them as they look a little too close and cluttered on the second build the amount of windows is making the build have a plain design if I’m not mistaken your going for those towns - city apartments.
I would try adding details to the build itself the windows could be changed I feel like they look a little out of place regarding the building is just placed with a bunch of windows all around it? At the start, it’s an alright build I would just fix up the overall color and materials make it fit the build you’re going for.
Its quite basic. Non shapes other than square and rectangles, for the building layout.
Building 1, The colors dont really go together. Maybe change the walls colors? Also, add some more windows, and add some stuff.
(Building 2)I recommend you start making weird shapes, start experimenting. The building is a bit to blocky? Add some cylinders to it? Add some pipes to represent the sewer system? Add some stuff on the roof.
Other than that, proud of what you did for a starter.