Could you guys give me feedback on this obby im making?

Hello! This game is still very much a (WIP) and has a long way to go. I was wondering if anybody would want to check it out and give me some feedback on how I can make it more unique, along with any good ideas for getting it out there when it’s ready.

The game:(SUPER FUN) OBBY! Escape The Obby (Free VIP💎) - Roblox

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I’d recommend only inserting 4-8 micro transactions in your game, make sure it’s in a shop tab and that the gamepasses are useful, and never do a popup advertisement

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Alright thanks, I’ll go ahead and get to work on a shop :slight_smile:

the ui buttons are not on my screen correctly

the game is nice but you have to do some stuff to make it better like
I’m a good scripter you can ask me for help

  1. Background music - mute/unmute button

  2. Remove double speed game pass it’s not useful

  3. Change the premium button name to Vip

  4. Add shop

  5. Make the ‘R’ button on the computer keyboard resets the player

  6. Make the ui buttons to be on the player screen correctly

I Hope this was helpful.


taking inspiration from a image I saw, already way better