Creation Feedback

Hello, everyone! Currently, I’m immersed in creating my inaugural game entirely on my own. It’s an obstacle course game, and I would greatly appreciate your thoughts and feedback. Since this is my first solo venture without any assistance, I’m open to all your comments and suggestions. Thank you in advance!

Please DO NOT provide false/fake and/or misleading feedback, would be greatly appreciated!

:link: Hard Obby (In Development) - Roblox

Enjoy! :smile:

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To be honset, this is terrible.
The loading screen looks bad. The skybox dosen’t fit the obby’s theme. The GUI looks rushed. The objects and materials don’t match well. The respawning is terrible. Obstacles are very glitchy. The 3rd obstacle is impossible. I HAD TO USE GLITCHES TO GET OVER THE SECOND OBSTACLES.
Overall, everything sucks.
Maybe you can try to make it better.

If this is one of your first games, this is really good. My first few games looked much worse. But there are definetly a few things you could improve on.

First of all, consistency; the whole game’s style is very inconsistent. Materials seem to be used at random and the staff only door looks really out of place, platforms seem to be randomly scaled, there is a lot of z-fighting and the UIs look completely different from eachother (and isn’t fully aligned properly).

Secondly, level design. Most stages are very unclear, and seem to have random invisible walls blocking ways you are supposed to go. Spacing out obstacles more and maybe having some guiding arrows could help?

But, except from that, as far as I can tell everything works fine. Keep going and I wish you the best of luck.