Hey, I just released this game a few days ago Dwarves VS Zombies - Roblox
If anyone has 10 minutes to spare, I’d be very grateful for some constructive criticism 
In particular, I think that my new player experience is a bit confusing, i’m trying to improve it. Does anyone have suggestions on how to do so?
Thanks 
Maybe you could add a sound effect for whenever the player clicks the UI such as “Next”.
About the tutorial:
To improve it, you could make so that the player must do certain actions or tasks before having access to full exploration, so the player would have a better idea on what to do.
Also in the description of the game, it says “Hold F to run” thing that, either didn’t appear in the tutorial, or I was more focused on looking at where the camera shows, more than the text.
Also there are parts of the UI (Mainly player screen) where it either looks, too simple and basic, or just confusing to new players.
Other than that, the map looks nice, just maybe adding some more lights to it?
Anyways, keep the good work, and good luck improving it!
Thanks, that’s a great help. I implemented the quest system in game as a way to make players do certain actions like you say, but i think perhaps some players are still confused or either don’t notice it or get distraacted by other things.
Yeah i think the UI is pretty cluttered, definitely not my strong suit. Do you have any advice on how to make it look less “basic”?
Thanks a lot!
I’m not too specialized at UI, but im sure that one of the best ideas to improve UI, is with images. Now, whenever you see UI in games such as, Build a boat, instead of just some “Blocks” with color, you see images, so you have the result you want, and all you gotta do is upload the necessary decals , so the UI is ready without any issue.
I also decided that I’m currently bored, so I’m gonna try exploring your game a little more deeper.
This is one of the details related to UI that has to improve, and is the position. The image literally covers part of the text.
The music is also sort of loud sometimes, you could make a menu to mute music, or change the volume without directly having to do it with the PC or roblox menu.
Good point, i hadn’t noticed that, thank you
There is a mute button already, but i don’t think it’s very visible. I’ll move it elsewhere
Thanks for your help
No problem, if I can i’ll even try helping more, so im gonna join the game again rn.
