[Edited] Opinions on low poly shop?

Hey! This is my first post on the fourms, so excuse me if I post anything out of line.

I am a programmer (for 4 years, going on 5) and I decided, why not try building? And low poly seems satisfying to my eyes, so I tried it out for myself!

But I know there are Top-notch builders out there, but this is my first time and will need suggestions/opinions for my next build I make. (This took me around 1-2 hours to make lol.)

Low poly store



Edited Version

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Damn dude that’s easily one of the nicest low poly buildings I’ve ever seen. It feels very unique with the sloping roof and the colors. Great job! :+1: :+1:

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I absolutely love the design of the store. Firstly, it looks very polished as it is not too crammed with parts and the quantity of colour is not overdone. Secondly, I love how you used a variety of different shapes in each part of the model, it allows the shop to have more life and not just some blocky approach.

However, I do recommend being mindful of the colours you select within your builds. For the tree, I know that the pot and the trunk are meant to be associated in a way, but having similar colours could be a problem for future builds. If you did not already know, there is a colour picker in which you can modify the light and darkness of the colour while altering it on the wheel. Secondly, I am not a big fan of those strokes on the windows and doors. They look a little bit out of place, I personally would just remove them entirely and just have it simple.

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I appreciate your feedback! And yeah, I personally thought that the pots shouldn’t be that same colour as the trunks and I will change it ASAP. :))

Wow! It looks incredible. You seem to understand colour theory and have a great understanding on proportions. Very good job :smiley:

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the store is one of the best low poly shops I have ever seen, personally the only thing I would change is the door to wood or something cause it looks slightly repetitive on the building so doing that would help but other than that awesome job :smiley:.

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Amazing, maybe change the pots a bit but everything is good. Good job Im too trash to build like that

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No ones trash at building, because that was my first low poly build. I didn’t expect to get this much positivity from the store I made. (As I explained in the post.)

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Consider me impressed, I’ve always loved the low poly style and this fits with that description perfectly. Super good job man!!!

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I like the effects on the windows but effect on the door is looking weird you should change door color and you should add flower and some tree variation

(lets call that cartoonish instead of low-poly)

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I’m going to make corrections you guys pointed out and implement them into my shop, and post it here. So hopefully it’ll be good!