Feed back on my first GFX?

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Hi so, I’m pretty new to GFX and I finished my first GFX and I would like some feedback and tips on how to make my future GFX’s better. Any help will be appreciated. Also if someone could teach me how to make the rigs of the render have kind of a “glossy” look I’d appreciate that, too.

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I made this for one of my best friends birthday since I couldn’t really get anything. I use Blender 2.83, Adobe Photoshop, and IbisPaint. Took around 1 hour to pose the rigs and everything and took around 5 hours to render.

Again this is my first gfx so it’s not perfect!

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Wow this GFX is great! I started 1 day ago and this is the result (Its bad)

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I started doing gfx yesterday, this is pretty good but are they outside or inside?

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might wanna change that.

ik its a mistake but still.

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Ahh okay, sorry I didn’t realize that lol

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Hey, I love what you did here, there are stuff I would like to point out and I will try to answer your question about the “glossy” look.

I’m not too sure if this will work but try to render on Eevee for a “glossy” look, I’m not sure if that will work but its good to give it a try :grinning:

I would also like to point out that the blue person’s leg is actually in the ground, you might want to fix that.

Also, the two peoples hand’s are inside each other so you might want to fix that.

But it’s actually good for your 1st GFX, carry on what your doing and you will definitely end up as a pro! :grinning:

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Wow! It’s very awesome, I can’t help a lot because I am beggining with GFX! But it is really awesome!

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For a first attempt it’s a good start, with that little bit of realism hitting the entire scene.

The posing structure is good if I were to suggest anything I’ll probably add a few characters watching the night stars or place for more users sitting in chairs socializing with each other or interacting. The lighting looks very good, love that moon glow casting shadows on different objects. Try bringing the characters leg structure out of the ground so it looks more appealing more characters can be placed around the empty corners.

Otherwise it’s a decent scene, hope to see what you’ll take this in the future.

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Alright ! Thank you sm for the feedback.

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Okay! Thank you a lot! And yeah I need to fix the leg haha

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Pretty good for starting out, My old stuff was bad at best only having a still image. Overall good job

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This is very good for a first GFX, all I recommend is removing a bit of the blur.

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That’s very good for a new person doing GFX! My only advice is you should try changing the render style to eevee as I think it would make your GFX
much sharper! Anyways, I love it!

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Hello, It looks great! It can use a little more texture because everything is smooth, but overall its great I love it! :smile:

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Wow, you’re new to GFX?! You did really good on it, your work is very impressive. I’m sure most of us will agree!

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