Recent Commission, feel free to hit me with anything.
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Great but Blood? Its way too realistic It may violate the ToS
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Oof good point, let me just remove that rq
I think it is violating but i couldn’t found a paragraph on the ToS
Blood isn’t really necessarily a ToS Violation, if the blood is proportioned and not in excess then its allowed since there are some games that use blood but in a cartoony styled way.
I think blood is allowed, but this will make the thumbnail (and possibly the game) unavailable on XBOX.
Would the blood presented in the thumbnail count towards being “cartoony”? in case not I made a another version with no blood.
This is better, plus blood was looking strange in the area
Challenge accepted
When it comes to game thumbnails, a player’s first glance at your GFX is the most important. When I first looked at your GFX, I thought it was a PvP game similar to Phantom Forces. The soldier on the left quickly caught my attention first, as he is the largest and firing a gun (which as a side note, is hard to distinguish as a pistol or a rifle at the angle he’s holding it). The two soldiers in the middle appear to be fighting each other, further causing me to believe this is a PvP game.
It actually took me a pretty good while to notice that there were zombies on the right side of the image. When I did see them, I first thought they were just inmates (due to their orange jumpsuits), which then caused me to think this game was actually a prison game. The first zombie’s blocky arm takes up a considerable amount of space, blocking out the other two zombies. As a whole, their positioning, size and visibility makes them practically invisible at a first glance.
Finally, the last notable thing that I saw was the game’s title. It’s rather small, if you ask me, and it’s not placed in a way that catches the eye. Once I saw it, I immediately felt like it should have been placed more to the left (where the eye-catching soldier is) and enlarged (even if some of it is obscured a bit by the soldier).
It was not until I saw the subtitle “SCP” that I finally understood what this game was about.
Similar to what I said, before, your GFX should say everything about the core of your game quickly and easily, and I don’t think that was achieved, here. The overall quality is great (you get a thumbs up for that 
), but if I thought it was two different types of game before finding the truth, that’s a bad sign.
Hope this helped!
It is way too realistic. It makes violate (i think?)
Thank you for this reply, overall I can see what you mean about the odd angles and the small fonts. I’ll try to apply this for future Graphics. Side note still new to using Octane rendering so the lighting was a issue, if I added another source of lighting it would start to do a firefly affect-https://gyazo.com/75ec62ca0f28fe6190d712cf79a56aa0
But thank you though for your review.