Hi, I’ve made these adverts. I don’t really know if they are good, so I’d like some feedback.
They are both very different in style, the horizontal one is simple while the other one is more click-bait towards younger players. What do you think.
They are both very different in style, the horizontal one is simple while the other one is more click-bait towards younger players. What do you think.
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I would say add more detail to the lettering honestly, they practically look all the same which just a change of color of glow, I think a different text color than just black would look best, maybe add some color cool gradients into the mix!
Another type a font would look good as well, not the biggest fan of this type of font
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A whole lot better! Genuinely, it looks alot more colorful and it matches the style way more better
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A good idea I feel like adding a backdrop would better than a glow, it’ll be a lot better personally, not entirely sure if that’s the right word for it
Maybe instead of images that are directly left hand views of each model make new images that show the model at an angle to get more ‘movement’ in the ad.
Honestly the top one seems pretty boring.
There are sooo many cart ride games out there so you need your ad to stand out and be better than the other cart ride games.
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Really good, but I wouldn’t target your ads for younger players because of a recent update roblox made about not lettings any account under 13 to see ads
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