Hey there! I just created this house from the 1970’s, it didn’t take that long to make, but I would love to receive some opinions on it! Feel free to give help, or criticize!
Thanks! 
Game: 1970's House - Roblox
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Honestly, it looks pretty good.
The colors are unique, and it’s very detailed.
I personally love it.
Keep up the great work! 
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I like the map. There are a few map issues where parts are not completely lined up. One thing I didn’t understand was that the driveway was white when usually driveways are black (and there was no brick or textures, so I assume it is not meant to resemble stone or brick).
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Thanks for the feedback on the build! 
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Yes, the map has a couple over-lapping issues, but they were just fixed, The driveway is supposed to resemble a older type of concrete, that’s why it is grayer, and the whitish driveway leading to the garage is supposed to resemble gravel/rocks. Thanks for the feedback on the build!
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The house looks good overall. One of the main things I don’t like about it is that you used the colors red and yellow and the materials don’t really go together. Did you make this in Studio?
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Thanks for the feedback, I was thinking of changing the yellow to a lighter or darker color. And yes, it was created in studio.
Your “1970’s House” looks really good. I think you really improved your skills a lot more and i like how you go with different kinds of styles, here is a couple of things to make, your house look more better.
Reference
I think the house has a great design, to it but there is a couple of things improving it. The image i have provided above has a architecture style to it. Which i believe looks like the 1970 house you have built! this will go well with your design to improve it more better!!
Brick Color/Windows
The red color you used for the house doesn’t go that will together, as seen above you could go use a darker color to stand out more. And add different colors to your house to give it a little more details instead of having one color, all over the house! i would add some dividers on the window part and frames to look more better. And implement other windows through the house to look more decent! I suggest you give the house more windows, and other colors to bring it out more…
House Material
Your house doesn’t have different material on it. Which is alright but i think it look more better if you used a different material instead, of having a brick material i think. You could go with a white steel material but a darker. Color would look a lot more better on your house! and try using some material on the roof part so it would not look, plain you could use a wooden material or shingles…
Details
The house doesn’t seem to have that much details on it you could add some larger windows on the yellow material area on the house. And give it some lights, bushes, flowers, trees, ect. To look a lot more better, and the garage part i would make that a steel material and maybe add some windows on the top area! to give it some details on it!!
Overall, you have done a great job on your 1970’s Style House hope to see more of your work very soon keep up the good work.
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Thanks for the feedback, I’ll make sure to use some of your suggestions, you made some good points. Thanks for the help!
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This could use a lot of work, I am not sure why you chose to do the bricks and the wood in the way that you did, but it didn’t turn out too well and I feel like using the standard brick texture on a large brick would do you better.
The layout and design of the house itself is fine, but it wasn’t executed well. Your colors clash, and certain materials should be replaced in certain spots. For example, the bricks in this texture would be much better as concrete:
In addition, the windows have no trimming and the gutter outlets aren’t connected to anything.
to fix your color clashing issue, I recommend this video, and even though it isn’t for building, it is usefel for understanding colors:
you also have some overlappings issues that could be fixed by just using a cylinder or unions.
keep practicing, and you will become a better builder on ROBLOX.
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I’d have your house look more like a split-level home, assuming thats the style you’re going for.
I would move the 2nd floor down to create the illusion of a shorter 1st floor, and I believe your build will make more sense.
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Thanks for the help and suggestions! I will put them in account!
Alright! Thanks for the suggestions! I will use them to help out the build!
https://i.gyazo.com/18dd56ab8b08fe302cec4aa223f85905.mp4
https://i.gyazo.com/88840b04805d5427bcc47e42ccf61398.mp4
It seems like you have some overlapping textures, what I suggest to do is to union them, and that will get rid of that effect. Solid Modeling | Documentation - Roblox Creator Hub
Other then that, you can polish the build with some realistic textures, and small details.
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