[Feedback] Blender GFX Render

I am beginning to learn making gfx with blender and I am looking for feedback. Here is something I recently made:

I appreciate all feedback :slight_smile:

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This is good. But the lighting seems not right. Also the hair is clipping through the hat. And the face looks kinda like wood. Good job! :clap:

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Lol, I didn’t even notice any of that but thanks for the feedback, I will improve these in the next one :slight_smile:

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I’d say you did pretty nice but the light reflecting on the head of the avatar is off putting and makes the GFX or render overall look bad other than that it looks pretty nice, have a good day! :smile:

Awesome ! :+1:
But the hair is clipping through the hat, the brim of the hat is too close to the arm,
and the shirt is pixelated.

But pretty good!

Looks good so far other than the hair clipping through the hat.

Keep up the good work!

This looks great! But I think you could put some bends in the arms, It just makes it seem more natural then just the arms looking like a robot. The lighting could use some more work also. But with a little bit of practice, you can improve. I know you will!

Maybe increase the brightness a little bit from front and add more strokes also new background.

Really cool, it has a neat aesthetic, and I like it… However, I think that the model is a bit too shiny, unlike human skin/clothing. There’s also some visible clipping from the hair to the hat, which might be unappealing to some people. The character’s right arm also looks quite unconnected from the torso, I’d recommend experimenting with moving the arm into what seems like a more comfortable position.
On the positive side, I really like the pose and character, it looks very sleek altogether. The colour scheme is also very complimentary, reds and blacks mixed together are like the peanut butter and jelly of colour theory.
Anyways, that’s just constructive criticism, do whatever you’d like to do with your renders! Creativity’s the limit, my friend. :grin:

Yeah, theres an extra light shining on it so I’ll remove it in the next one. thanks for the feedback

Thanks for the criticism, I will take these into consideration the next gfx i make

No problem, I’m glad I could help :slightly_smiling_face: