[FEEDBACK] Castle and Sword

Hi, I just want some feedback on some stuff I made. I’m relatively new to DevForum, so I would like some general strangers to comment on some examples of my builds to see how good I am. Please be as brutally honest as need be, but I would like an assessment of these example builds. Thanks! :slightly_smiling_face:


Sword looks really nice, perhaps its missing few curves and edges so that it has that sword look.
As for the castle it looks plain and boring, you’re using 3 colors, try adding contrast, windows or holes. Perhaps something underneath it so it’s not just grass.

There well done builds! Although try placing more design into the blade giving it more details instead of something straight and sharp look try using some techniques to add a few touches even in a basic design or whatever approach your going for it’s really up to you.

The castle itself looks good, but I would recommend adding a few more objects to improve the quality of the front entrance I’m assuming this is a build that’s used for battling other enemies. From the looks of it the archers look quite small consider adding small slots on the tower (so people can watch and patrol at night or in the evening time).

Perhaps small flags that are placed in front of the build giving it more details instead of something that looks unfinished and not that much detail going on.

It’s a decent build i would perhaps work on adding different props to make it more realistic.

I really like the castle and the sword, but I think you should add more texture since it looks a bit plain at the moment. Best of luck!

The builds itself are good.

The only problem are textures, or the lack thereof.
If you want to create a build that can make an impression, I would advise that you start experimenting with textures. There are plenty available under Models in the Toolbox. At some point you may want to start making your own, but for now, you can start with premade ones.

When it comes to textures, you also need an image of your head of what the castle needs to look like. If you’ve just started out with textures, you can use a concept image to broaden your understanding of the final outcome.

Good luck!

The castle and the sword is very cool, I guess that you are doing a castle game or something like that.

Have a nice day. : P

Hi, I just want to say thank you for your feedback. I’ve been experimenting with textures for a few hours and my builds are starting to look so much better(at least to me). This is exactly the kind of help I was looking for when I made this post. Thanks!

No problem. :slightly_smiling_face: