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Hi my name is crew. I am a building noob so can yall help me. Check out some of my stuff down there :arrow_down:
Check Out My Builds
Here is my showcase game:
Model Showcase! - Roblox
And here is the shop(ik all the other stuff is FM)-Bobby's Shop - Roblox

icerink nice apartments

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Looks great, just out of interest, do you have a link to a public game? So I can see it fully.

Ya here is a link to my portfolio game! Also thanks I thought they looked bad TBH so that is a surprise.
https://www.roblox.com/games/refer?PlaceId=4462354332&Position=1&Page=0&PageType=Profile

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To be honest, I am quite optimistic, positive about lots of things and can be easily impressed. I would recommend aligning the doors on the balcony to be in line with the balcony, same with the doorknobs. Also the car looks weird, it is quite stretched out if you know what I mean.

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Alright. Ya I will fix that. And the truck idek it was the first thing I made so ya thx for the feedback! :slightly_smiling_face:

It is something basic but it can be something unique if you take the time and build with patience. good job.

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Decent buildings just needs a few edits to it. I’d recommend re-sizing the buildings according to a ROBLOX avatar as the windows and door is 10X bigger than the avatar. I’d also recommend using textures on your buildings to give the buildings some effect on it. I’d also recommend a different color scheme to fit appropriately with your buildings. Other than that it’s a decent job. Keep up the good work! ![]
Resizing needed:

(https://gyazo.com/1f39bee500cfb0d0ff84651add5e7915.jpg)
https://gyazo.com/1f39bee500cfb0d0ff84651add5e7915

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Ok thanks I will work on that. Also I am trying to start using a palette of better colors.

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Everything in there is actually good, but when will we be able to go inside those buildings?

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Looks Great. But In The Second Image The Windows Are A Little Off.

I think the buildings look okay. Another tip would be to watch of building videos (since many builds are pretty basic). Overall a great start for something cool.

Looks alright for a building noob

I think you should use less vibrant colors, those blue doors on the first and second images look really off

The doorknobs are off centered with the doors, I recommend putting a line in the middle (between the doors) so you know how much you have to move to put them on their correct spot

Use dummies to have a scaling reference, all the doors are too tall and the windows are really big

For that circle thing, I think you should leave that kind of stuff for the future, keep building simple & blocky buildings before you move on to the round stuff… I’ve been a builder for enough time to be considered experienced now, and I still can barely do stuff with cylinders and circles

For Bob’s shop, try coming up with some details and put more colors into it

Now, about building tips in general, watch some videos on youtube, you’ll find things that the building pros use to make it so it’s easier and faster to build, or maybe you should just watch some videos on useful plugins, it really helps