[Feedback] First Render in a while

Good day, Mates, This was my first render in a while now… I’m pretty bored so I decided to do this, Anything on what I should improve?

It was fun to play around with, I’m pretty happy with it.

Note: Messed the bump nodes up a bit, lighting is not that well either, Guess we all learn…huh?

Lets see what you have in store for me… :eyes:

Constructive Criticism would help. :+1:

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The detail of this GFX really stands out. I like how in the background you have an army sort of blurred, but the main character is razor sharp. One suggestion i have is to adjust the lighting - the sky is too reflective/too bright. Maybe try playing around with the lighting to what gives you the best result.

Hope I helped improve this GFX!

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really like the detail used in the render especially if it’s made after a while, what I do recommend is adding more colour to it as it looks very blunt

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Hey there, Happy!

Thank you so much for the feedback, I will definitely try to improve my Render’s with that. :smile:

This was my first render in a while so that’s why I was a bit off.

Have a great day,
Kind Regards, Morphic.

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Hello, anross.

Thanks for the feedback. As this was set in a very weary & dark type of theme, I did not add much color to it as I wanted it to be a bit “sorrowing”. I really appreciate your concerns though. Thanks for your time! :+1:

Have a Awesome day!
Kind Regards, Morphic.

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The neon elements I feel are very bright, while the rest of the image is dark. That is the only thing I would change, otherwise it looks great!

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Hey there, Disqrete.

I have noticed that they are quite bright as well, I will surely change use your feedback on my other GFX’s.

Have a Great Day!,
Kind Regards, Morphic.

I feel you should tone the glow down, I’m not Art Designer myself but it’s still very obvious that glow can be somewhat obstructing, I’d suggest for the eyes you make it a glass material/texture, and again please tone the glow down, skin shouldn’t react like that to the sun even in the hottest of areas. And neither should the swords react like that, they’d just get more reflective, and not glowy.

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Hello, There.

Thank you for your feedback, I will try to imply it to my next renders. :+1:

Have a Nice day,
Kind Regards, Morphic

I love it! It’s so so hot. :fire: :fire: :fire: :heart_eyes: You thought about the details, the glowing eyes, etc. Really perfect. As for the bump (auto correct my bad), I don’t see how you messed it up, but oh- :flushed: Anywho, really great render for your first one in a while!

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Greetings, Iyoor.

Thank you so much for your response, I did mess the lighting up by making a tad bit too bright. But thanks for your comments.

Have an Amazing Day!
Kind Regards, Morphic.

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