Hello everyone! I am basically seeking some feedbacks & criticisms for an upcoming game I made. It is based of a Dystopia / Sci-fi genre. Here are some of my builds, what do you think?
NOTE: These are just interiors.
Hello everyone! I am basically seeking some feedbacks & criticisms for an upcoming game I made. It is based of a Dystopia / Sci-fi genre. Here are some of my builds, what do you think?
NOTE: These are just interiors.
It looks alright, Just the Lighting that seems throw you off.
I think making the interior look more uncomfortable could make the game more dystopian. The bunks have already done this. However, there’s room for exposed plumbing and other utilities in the other places. A lack of extra space will help to create a dystopian atmosphere. Maybe also low lighting, like what’s seen in the third image everywhere.
The texture and colour choices have done a great job at making a dystopian atmosphere, so keep doing that.
You tried, you tried, these are clearly real-life images
Only one word:
Stunned
Only thing is lighting
Intriguing!
I really love the bunks. I think you’ve utilized the space there nicely and it looks futuristic whilst still tied to how we know bunks in real life.
Although I personally love the plants, they do not give me a dystopian feeling. I think your pictures certainly give a sci-fi vibe, but to me at least, it looks rather positive.
When it comes to the meeting room, I’d highly recommended you get rid of a lot of the empty space. If you search up images of meeting rooms you’ll see they’re typically a lot more cramped. By bringing it closer to what we’re used to in real life, you’ll make your scene feel a lot more believable.
As others have mentioned, the lighting definitely feels off, for instance the lines of shadow we see in the second picture are not something you’d expect to see in a building that’s clearly quite well thought out by the designers in this fictional setting.
Overall though I think you’ve done a tremendous job, and coming up with points for criticism was not easy! Well done! ![]()