Hiya! so I’ve been building for a week now, and this is my latest progress.! Kindly give me feedback!!
RobloxScreenShot20200724_222302931|690x492 (upload://hb9fGIypGMOUHjqqXvQPXMoVEkm.png) If you want to take a closer look, here is the link to the game! Cafe game - Roblox
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I really like the cafe itself along with the custom textures you used for the flooring! I think there are two things you can do to improve your build:
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The lighting. It looks like you are going for a realistic build, so should have realistic lighting to make things in your cafe pop. Experiment with the lighting settings and see what you like.
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The surroundings: Your cafe looks to be on a flat island. For me, it doesn’t really fit well. The island should be more island-like, it should be more hilly, filled with trees and plants. The sand part of the island should only be seen around the islands’ edges, where it meets the water.
If I was working on the cafe, I would completely change the setting and place it in a city. I feel that it would better fit the build you are going for. But, the choice is yours.
Keep up the good work!
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You could perhaps work on the colours a bit more, for a cafe it looks pretty dull.
Consider adding lights, working on the textures you have used - maybe don’t use too many textures?
The scenery is a beach theme, maybe try to add beach related objects , instead of the brown boarder on the sand you could add some hills differently leveled. The trees don’t fit the theme too well, so I’d avoid them and go for something like palm trees
Overall great work, and keep it up!
i think its an alright build but Feedback would be…
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consider making your models in blender, the models in your cafe look very blocky
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i think the color scheme is a bit off
Looks decent it’s just your material selection seems to be all over the place, it feels way too open, however, I feel like there is a lot more you could add to the interior as it looks way to open and bland, however I think it’s still a work in progress build.
I would suggest detailing it up a bit by adding the decorations, as by looking at the image it’s really unfinished I do believe you could add tables, menu, restrooms, sign, ect. However, I think that another thing that you should try to work is using inspiration for finding a material selection or color scheme. Since you’re making a cafe try looking at existing builds and images of the things that you are trying to create.
I can see your wanting a realistic approach if so I would recommend to add the final details to the cafe such as proper chandeliers try choosing a different material for the ceiling since grey isn’t always the option. Try exporting other cafes and see how to make the place stand out and set a proper atmosphere. 
Hey, i just wanted to say that i love the build! but here are some things that i would change:
More variety in color
More variety in shapes (it’s basically a square)
Besides that, your progress looks awesome! Keep on going!
The cafe looks awesome but I think the docks rail color doesn’t fit with a modern theme that has grey and brown mostly but that’s just me and also it just feel like the cafe is plain and not much details is add to it.
You should probably add more detail to the build and plants to make the interior nice.
Other than that it looks great! Keep up the good work! 
Oh, for the sand, I never actually bothered to change it, the sand was used from my other project, I’ll try to change it later.
I would suggest adding more dimension to the build. It makes the build feel more complex and not just a giant open block.
Thanks for the feedback! I’ll try changing it.