Hey everyone! I’ve once again made another game just to get some feedback on it. If you actually want to try it out the link is here: Gulf War - Roblox.
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Hello! After playing you’re game for a bit, I have a bit of criticism I’d like to share.
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First off, I am unable to tell if the models that are in you’re game are free-models or if there custom made. I’ll assume they are custom made though even with some doubts, and if they are truly custom made the modeling on the tanks and buildings are impressive.
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Secondly, the map does not make much sense. The game is about the Gulf war, yet we are playing on a grassy plain with a Mcdonalds and some buildings and trees in the center with a billboards along the side of the streets? And a highschool with an American flag on it? Most of the map is not put together to well, and is very confusing. Not only that, but I’m not sure what the real point of the game is.
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Lastly, the entire map is just a square, and the only hills seen is the ones that are borders, maybe add more detail to the landscape and change textures to make this part better!
Sorry if the criticism was a little harsh, but you should learn from it. Thanks!
This is image from the game and uhh…
Why does US have mcdonalds uniform and chill face? (maybe it’s roblox loading thing I don’t know).
And you have to fix the ground. I mean 3d grass. because it don’t look like well.
Also the map isn’t decorated well. You should put something around the map like more trees, destroyed building or vehicles, some bushes or whatever to make it look better. And make terrain less flat. Also you should put some invisible barriers on the borders of map to protect players from falling off map. Also these borders aren’t really looking good. Map is too big.
You should USE LESS free models.
You tried aim with sniper rifles? You should do something with Scope to make players be able to see throught this.
Players are quite slow so do script that make people be able to run or make run speed higher.
Adding Thumbnail would be good too. Why? Thumbnail will make game more visible while searching games.
Server size is too low like on that big map.
Description is quite bad too.
I wrote pretty much abount your game and I hope it’s going to be helpfull. Also I’am giving your game favorite and like for motivation ;).
I joined game again and I was wrong abount mcdonalds suit and chill face.
uh, not to be harsh but, most of the models in this game are free models, I can tell that because the style of the builds are blocky, realistic, or semi realistic. There isn’t anything to do. The tanks are free models, so are all the buildings and trees. You should rework this gaem and make your own models and make it more interesting.