Feedback for my 1st GFX

Hello. I am Scripted_Vortex. I’ve recently made this GFX for a game me and 2 other people are working on and I want your honest feedback on it (what I did wrong and how I can improve it)

Other Information:

  • I used Roblox Studio to make it. I know all of you will recommend me to use blender, but I am currently unable to understand it. I am planning to use it once I learn to use it.
  • It was edited with paint. net.
  • For the lighting, I just messed around with the lighting properties and added a few lights.
  • For the fire, I used Roblox particles.
  • I spent around 40 minutes on it.
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It looks great for your first one!

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The first time it turned out pretty cool, keep up the good work!

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Thanks for all your feedback. Are there any ways for me to improve?

I think yes.
If you have not used Blender before, then I advise you to start using it, thanks to it, you can improve your skills.

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I love this GFX! Are you using it for a game thumbnail?

That is correct. Yes I am using this for our game.

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I like it! Will you be opening comms?

WOW! If that’s your 1st time, I say you have amazing potential with this!

At the moment, I am not planning to. But I might in the future.

i have no words. this is astonishing and super impressive for your first gfx! and considering that this was done in studio?! wow. i can still remember my first gfx; done in blender, lifeless, bland, no effects, no editing, horrible lighting. comparing it to yours, it’s just, wow. its only your first gfx, and you’re already adding fire effects, a logo, basically all this crazy stuff that i probably wouldn’t have the slightest idea to do when i started. it seems like you’re gonna make great improvements as you explore the gfx aspect more. im excited to see your works in the future.

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Not that bad for the first time and doing it in Roblox Studio.

If that’s your first one, then I should quit. That’s amazing.

Wow, is that really your first one!? That looks great! If you do think you could of done better you need to keep in mind that this is only your first one, and if your first one looks that good, dang… Imagine what you could do in the future!

For your first gfx it looks amazing! Great job.