Hello, I started building like a few months ago and am not really that good when it comes to building so I decided to listen to you guys for any advice or feedback to make me improve for future builds you guys are much more experienced than me so please give me any feedback or advice. This is the build (took about a day or two to make.)
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Nice build, I think you can improve it by adding more nature. Trees, rocks etc to cover some land.
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Good looking build, Is this for an Showcase or an Horror game?
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Its a showcase, I just got inspiration from a horror game.
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Nice build though, Darvean! 
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Thanks! this really means a lot 
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Youâve done a great job on this build.
As stated above, adding trees and rocks would definitely make this look better.
It might look good if you add some lamps in the sides, or broken things like chairs or tables to add that spooky feeling to your building since you got an inspiration from a horror game.
Other than that, itâs really good. Keep up the great job
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You should add more details to every model. Also, try adding some natural stuff like flowers, trees, rocks, bushes and maybe animals like birds, dogs, cats.
If you want to improve on the gameâs ambient, try looking on the âLightingâ settings, itâs in the Workspace.
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Your âLate Nightâ showcase you have made looks really good. Once i first joined the building has that spooky feel to it, as by joining and checking out the place i know the! Building would look more better with spooky things around the, building such as (House Vines) now you would most likely see these vines on the brick houses or! Houses that have shingles either, on the side of the building or all over it. I would recommend you add some vines around the electrical box, on the side of the building this would make your showcase! Look a lot more better if this was added, you could add some around the electrical box or, some coming onto the house i know this would give your creation that spooky look to it. And by adding more vegetation around the environment i would try adding some trees, aluminum outdoor post, vines, stacked bricks, rocks, broken sticks, ect. Those would give your house a nice spooky feel to it, but i would just add a couple of rocks and trees around the exterior part just to look more better! And then you could try adding some vines, around the porch stairs to look like the house been abandoned for a while. Or a long time!
However depending on what kind of look, your trying to go for i feel like you should add some crows on top of the roof. Just to give it that look to it and then you could either! Add some broken things on the terrain part such as chairs, lamps, cracked windows, rusty car, wood pieces, and others around the exterior part i know you added a mail box. And fences around the house put if your going for a spooky feel i think you could add! Some vines wrapped around the fences to look more improved and then. If you plan on adding some interior details you could add some pictures chairs, tables, book shelve, fridge, couches, coffee table, carpet, ect. These are just a couple of decorations you could try adding if you plan on adding some details! Inside the interior but if donât want to add no details inside i would suggest you either, add some couches tables and chairs just to make the house feel empty. And i would try adding some cracked lamps hooked on the. House walls overall you have done a great job creating this house, i really like the spooky feel you have made here i would just add some more details.
Anyways, you have done a really nice job creating this nice showcase i know. With the final details your showcase would look a lot more better and. I liked how you got inspiration from other developers as thatâ's a really good idea, to get started with making creations or from real life things as thatâs what people do they get, inspired from real life buildings or other peoples! Work and then they try to create that as thatâs what your. Doing and i know when itâs finished it will look a lot more better and i would try adding, a couple of vegetation around the environment not to much since you already have bushes. And grass you want it to look better so the details i listed above i know they will make! Your showcase stand out a lot more overall i canât wait to see what it turns, out like and i would like to check it out once itâs completed anyways. I hope you keep working on your showcase and i know it would turn out great!!
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