Hello! I’ve been doing GFX for approximately one day, my goal is to evolve in this area. Here’s my first GFX, give me feedback!
GFX:
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Looks cool!
Only the person on the bench looks a bit blurry
but overall nice 
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Thank you sir! Really, she was kind of “out of focus”.
Would probably change up the poses, they don’t fit in the scene. If you get what I mean.
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Maybe add more lighting and add a reflection on the car.
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I understood completely, they are not suited to the situation experienced at GFX.
Yes, I added a little “HDRI” to the car.
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Yeah I get that but then why does the bench look not that blurry if you get what I mean 
Yes, the character’s glasses have low opacity.
I know others have said this, but the poses could use some work. As far as the police officer, he might look better holding handcuffs. The character on the bench looks tilted to the side, and it’s unclear whether he’s sitting. Maybe farther left on the bench would look better. The criminal (if he is one) would look better if he was running from the cop, and if his gun was more visible. Otherwise, it’s a nice GFX.
Thanks for the feedback! I would absorb all the criticisms for my growth!
No problem. I didn’t realize it was your first, that’s amazing lol.
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Although I do not dedicate myself to this, I must tell you that it has worked out for you, I like it
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Thank you sir! Hands on, I need to create my portfolio.
This is amazing, nice work on your first GFX. It’s perfect.
Thank you Lord, this is just the beginning, I guarantee it.
Looks pretty good, but the cop’s gun just looks like a black line. It’s hard to tell what he’s holding if you really look.
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I agree with you friend, thanks for the criticism!