Second GFX.
Hi, I am Twemply and I am going to show you guys the GFX I made.
What I made:
I would like to have some feedback about what needs to be better for the next GFX I make.
The model is not made by me. I will make the model next time. I made that character. Thanks for reading! 
wow, it looks rlly good! a tip i have for you is to improve the lighting and dont make things indentical, like the small pillows 
Looks good, but maybe make it a little lighter? Try to play with the lighting too. I would also reccomend making your own poses and not using the default Roblox ones. But from that pretty nice GFX!
Okay, I will do it better next time! Thanks for telling me about the pilows. Thanks.
Sure! I will watch it the next time I will make a GFX! 
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Great render! My only concern is the lighting, it’s too dull. But overall great job! 
Hello! First off, I really love the scenery and the amount of creativity put into this GFX! However, there are a few things you can do to improve this. I’d suggest dimming the lighting and adding a lamp beside the bed. This gives it a more “bedroom” feeling. Also, maybe you could make the character’s pose a bit more dynamic. Having him do something will give the GFX a more lively feeling. I’d suggest having him writing in a notebook, or standing in a thinking pose. For example, I made a GFX similar to this, and I made the character sit on the bed while drinking a milkshake.
Looks really good just wish the lighting was better. 
Nice job on the GFX, I would detail the walls a bit more, since having just 2 paintings just makes the walls bland.
