Feedback for my obby

Title. I’ve been working on this obby for about a month now and would like some feedback. I started learning roblox studio about 6 months ago, but i was crap and relied too much on free models. So then i forgor everything and started scripting again back around New Year’s.
This is the first game I REALLY focused and started to love scripting.
Hope you guys like it.
Link: Troll Obby [BETA] - Roblox

Really well done for a 6 month old beginner. Keep it up!

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Thank you for the support! People like you really motivate me to keep making these.

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Looks good, but you should add more thumbnails to the game to make people know what it looks like. It would also be good if you made sure they look good and maybe have a design for them with the game name.

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Also, make the first letters of the first words of every sentence in the description capital.

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Thank you! The first sentence was purposely incorrect, but everything else is grammatically correct. I’ll be sure to add more thumbnails.