I’m currently working on an obby and I want feedback of how it looks
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If I’m correct, the first 2 photos look like they have a ‘low poly’ look, while the other 2 have more materials incorporated into them. Either make the theme for the most part low poly or with materials, like for the first 2 use the brick material or concrete. For the last photo, for texture maybe, you could make the spilled coffee the sand material.
Sidenote, you see where the coffee mug is? Now, there’s that spilling coffee part coming from the cup. Try aligning the cup or spilled coffee so it doesn’t look like it turned by an unknown source.
Also, the coffee that’s getting spilled doesn’t touch the table, but you could leave it like that if you make the cup slightly off the table.
Otherwise good obby design.
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They all feel a bit cramped. It’s also a lot to process. Try making it look cleaner maybe?
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Looks good, though some areas could add more too them. In this case, the first photo, try to make more parts instead of burgers. Also with the last photo, the coffee does not seem to be covering all the floor evenly.
Though, a decent build nevertheless.
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Thanks, I will try to add some of your suggestions
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It bring some memories of those McDonald’s obbies that I would play. It is kinda out of date and hard to look at other than that It’s good!
Can we play yet? it’d be good to see things in motion
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