Feedback for tsunami script (gura-gura no mi)

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#1

Hey!
Just finished my gura-gura no mi script from One Piece.
Here is what it looks like:
https://streamable.com/zyesw6
Give me some feedback on what to improve please.

Credits

Models and sounds → Toolbox (had to search for like half an hour to find a good model for the tsunami and the cracks lol).
CameraShakes → An open-source module named CameraShaker.
Local and ServerScripts (includes using the module, tweening, …) → By me.

Edit: Sorry, the video wasn’t playing, uploaded a new one.

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#2

OK i LOVE the shaking and the tsunami
GREAT work keep it up-

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#3

I think they are great, but it will need some improvements:

  • Particle Effects

  • Textures on the Waves

  • Trail

With all of these requires I think it would look great! :grin:

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#4

Does this look any better or does the texture not fit? I also added some smoke.
https://streamable.com/u3xgzb

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#5

WOAH looking good so far
that is really good

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#6

Yeah, the detail of the waves is rather bland compared to the detail of the avatar & blue lightning effects.

I’d also recommend turning off Discord notifications the next time you record a video. :rofl:

Other than that, you done did good. Nice work. :+1:

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#7

Haha, you are right, I forgot that! :laughing:
Thank you for the feedback!

#8

Hi, honestly I think it’s good. If it would be a real water effect then this model would be great. However, from what I see it’s working smoothie so well done!

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#9

The Discord thing is beeping like crazy, you have quite an active chat.

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