Hey guys! Ramen here! So, this time i’ve made a thumbnail that would be designed for a obby game, the logo over there is just for practicing purposes.
I wanted to know what do you guys think about this thumbnail! Note that the space is closed, that’s why i used ambient occlusion. How’s posing? Should i add anything else to the thumbnail? Thanks for your time!!
This is a really good render! The only thing i can really suggest, is adding a background, or changing the color. the balls are too close to the backgrounds color. You can make it focus more on the players, maybe by adding blurs, or making the characters bigger? Overall, you did really good but theres room for improvement.
The depth of the thumbnail is very nice!
And that logo as well.
But i find it a bit bland. These bubbles are done very well and it explains the theme perfectly! However, other than the bubbles and characters…
It is just a blue background
Maybe try adding like water particles, smaller bubbles, shades of slightly dark blue.
@ItzRamenn It looks good, the details make it look like an actual obby, you should make the transparency for the ball lower so it can be easily seen, and that’s all have a good day!
Great concept. Here are some recommendations I’d personally do.
1 - The background seems too empty for me personally honestly with something even blurred in the back can help. 2 - The logo is a bit blurry so if you can get like a Higher Resolution version that’d help. 3 - Great rigging in the characters I think adding a light source so there are shadows and highlights on the balls and characters can really show the depth and detail in everything. You won’t need to add what looks like an outer glow.
I was just searching for random logos on the internet, Just wanted to practice! And about number 3, it was a closed space, that’s why i didn’t add any light sources!
The GFX renders is really good and the icon is well done i give a thumbs up on this one but the balls are hard to see if someone has a weak vision so maybe change the color of that ball but overall it is good
I really like the simplicity of the thumbnail! I personally do not like the shine on the red tuxedo guy’s teeth, but that’s my opinion. Another thing I think you could add is some motion blur for the guy jumping from one bubble to another, just like your character falling. Lastly, I feel like the bubbles/balls could use a bit more detail. Other than that I admire your work!