Hello,
I’m working on my Lobby like a few months ago.
but I still need your “Feedback” for more content.
plus I cannot put a photo because I don’t know how to send it to you guys.
I hope you guys understand what I mean…
anyway, here Is the “ID” for the game need to share with you guys.
Link:
I hope you guys have a fantastic day.
See You Soon.
Whether or not you actually made this build, I like it, so we’re going to assume you did make it. I like this build, the low poly trees are simple, but effective when giving it a basic and nice lobby design. The old styled houses are well done and the use of decals/textures is great! There are a few instances where the decals don’t match all that well, but overall it’s fine as it is.
Feedback—
The overall theme and feeling I get from this lobby is special, and I feel like it could be enhanced if you were to make a more variety of trees for the lobby. There only seems to be 3 types of trees scattered around the smooth terrain map. I would suggest making more different types of trees with more branches and just in general whole different tree types. If you can accomplish that, this would be an almost perfect lobby.
The smooth terrain is done well and is polished so I applaud you on that, however there appears to be cobblestone popping around on the side of cliffs/hillsides which does look fine but I wouldn’t use it. Why you may ask, is because most players that view cobblestone wouldn’t imagine it to be on a cliff-side which might give them the wrong feeling for your design. I do think it’s a fine thing, however to a broad audience, I would assume they wouldn’t really see fit to it since they aren’t that familiar with building.
The water flow seems to just be a square path which isn’t natural at all. I would suggest fixing this to make it more natural and put rocks around it and possible shrubs. Speaking of shrubs, that leads me into my next subject.
Shrubs, bushes, whatever you want to call them, there seems to be a lack of them in this lobby, I would go ahead and add some around like you did your trees, it would give more depth and detail. Make sure when you make the meshes for your bushes, make a variety of them to make it appear more natural and realistic. When you do make your bushes, make sure to rotate them unlike your trees, to which I’ll point out.
It appears you rarely rotated your trees in this lobby which is a bit lazy in my opinion, but it can be easily fixed. Make sure to avoid this in the future
Also, come on, floating wood poles? You have to teach me how to do this, I wish my wooden poles could float! Seriously, teach me.
Ending Thoughts—
Overall this is a great lobby with a few inconsistencies and errors that can be fixed. There are a few errors on the houses, but at that point I would be nitpicking and I don’t want this post to turn into that. So I’ll leave it as this. Great job so far Rising!
Thx for you big and also special feedback. if you find somebody needs a lobby you use this for somebody and when any event come to Roblox website you can use this lobby ask a special place to come for any player