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Hello, I am looking for feedback on my group’s game that is a showcase. This game is to show what my game Legion City looked like and some buildings are based on Singapore and/or the USA. Take a look at my images:

The buildings:

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A local restaurant (decorations are work in progress):
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Trying to make a smartphone store:
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A local park (old):
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A local park with remodeled bridge:
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You can send me feedback so my Roblox Group Game can improve!

If you want to try this game, please go to this game link:

Legion City is an action game that is inspired by Grand Theft Auto games and prison games like Jailbreak, Mad City, Moon City, etc. in Roblox where you can start a robbery, make money, own an apartment or a house, etc.

Previously I put PBR textures to make it more realistic but I faced a problem where I play this game and the Waiting for available server takes like an hour to load, I decided to remove the PBR textures.

All of the buildings in these photos are not final

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Looks great with all the images that I’m looking at, but I do see some concerns:

  1. The last image, I see some grass peaking out from the sidewalk or brick material, would suggest getting rid of it.

I was going to do another concern about it, but it didn’t look bad to remove it, great work! :happy4:

Telamon is out!

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Yeah, I was going to use the paint tool and use the non-grass material to remove it but thanks for notifying me!

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I don’t see too many issues except for the last pic. I believe changing the color of the grass (can be done by clicking on terrain in workspace and viewing it in properties, where it can be found under “material color”) to a nicer color would be nicer unless a cartoon feeling is what you are going for.

Additionally, you could try adding different types of trees to the park

Good luck!

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I’m unsure but are those free models in the park? The restaurant window looks like a prison window, in the first pic there are no windowframes to the windows and in the park the bridge is like 2 planks. Otherwise, it looks pretty great

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I like it, I think it’s only missing furniture, and stuff like exterior lighting. Looks good!

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I haven’t made a vintage asian window yet to insert the window frames, The restaurant window is based on Singapore and Malaysia, I usually saw these type of windows in Malaysia and Singapore. and I put these free models for testing and viewing purposes only, therefore, I will remove them eventually if I have time to remodel the benches and the trash can. The last thing is a bridge, I have to make a 3d model of a bridge soon and the bridge is not final. All of these pictures shown are not final.

UPDATE: The last thing is that I tried to put PBR textures into the game to make it more realistic but the downside is that everyone might face is that the waiting for available server will took like an hour. So I decided to remove the PBR textures.

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