*How could I make this build more attractive?
*What could I do to improve?
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It looks very good! You can add some details for windows. Also you can remove bricks under windows and change them for anything else.
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Apart from what was already mentioned I would recommend you make the pathway randomized instead of having the same pattern for the doors. Try different polygons if you like.
Actually you really did an impressive job on your Low-Poly just make the windows have a proper texture like this.
Because the way your Low Poly is cartoonish I prefer the windows also have a cartoonish design with a light reflection texture.
Also, your Low-Poly should have advertisements on the windows because the buildings look like shops. Put up some signs that says open or put a logo that represents a restaurant.
In all, I really like your low-poly and hope you use this in a game your going to publish.
Overall, I think it looks pretty good, however there a few things you could try improving on your low poly build.
The first thing I’ll improve is the “bricks” under the window I don’t really think that fits well with your build because their rather big. You should try making them small but not too small because then they would be too thin in my opinion, that would ruin the look of your build but try removing the bricks underneath the window part to look more clean.
The second thing which stood out to me was the shape and the design of the building you have created seems overly detailed in my opinion try making different buildings instead of duplicating the same build. Maybe try adding some bushes, hanging plants, signs, ect. However, I can’t tell whether it is a store or a restaurant.
That being said I think it overall looks pretty good!
It looks nice. But you could add a little more detail to the windows.
Other than that, good job!
I agree with majority of those on here that’s a very nice build. The only thing I’d suggest is creating a sort of shine texture / tint on the windows. I’d also suggest pushing those bricks a little further into the wall as they’re bulging out quite a bit.
If you’re going for a restaurant type of look, you should maybe add some tables outside or near the window’s. Or, maybe you could put some flower’s outside the place to make it have a bit more “pop” to it. Other then that i think it’s great!
Overall looks very good! Maybe you could add some corner bricks in a pattern like I’ve shown below.
I’d agree with @KRABPLYT in saying you should remove the bricks under the windows, as they look a bit odd with the build. Great job though!
It looks great, I really like the style!
- Try detailing the windows more, add another layer, add a lighter effect in the inside.
- Decrease the wall blocks on the sides, it pops out too much.
- Change the sign, make it more appropriate with the style that you choose.